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Chronicle Aftermath Fanfiction Part 3"So. Mr. Detmer, let's see what you have in your fridge," the agent opened up his refridgerator. There was very little food, and a lot of alcohol, mostly whiskey. The old man sighed in his recliner. "Look, you can call me Richard, okay?! And for God's sake, I know I fucked up! But why do you have to keep punishing me for it with the mindgames?!" The agent walked over and sat down on the couch with a beer in hand and took a swig of it. Richard stroked his beard and changed to a curious expression."What's your name, anyway? You haven't even told me.""That's none of your business," he said, pausing to take another swig of the beer. "But you can call me Carter.""Carter, huh.." Richard stroked his beard more in deep thought and then sighed and looked frustrated again. He was miserable in life to begin with and now realised taking out his misery on others - particularly, his son - had just made his life infinitely more miserable. He still didn't want to accept the fact he indirectly cause